The greatest place where I had visited is Bali. It has so many beautiful places. The first is Kuta Beach, Kuta Beach is the most favorite beach in Bali and, it has a white sand and beautiful view. There are many activities can be done at Kuta Beach such as swimming, surfing, walking through the beach, and relaxing. There are so many sellers at Kuta Beach such as accessories seller, temporary tattoos makers, massagers, umbrellas sellers, and hair brading service. And the most important thing if you visit to Kuta Beach please do not miss the moment to see the beautiful sunset at Kuta Beach.
Another place is, Dream Land Beach. I love this beach so much because the area has a beautiful beach and panorama, with the high wave reaching 4 meters makes this place become a favorite place for surfers and boogie boards. Dream Land Beach is similar in nature to the other beaches in Bukit Peninsula, but it is popular not only for the surfers, but also for the beach lovers. Dream Land Beach is visited by lots of tourists, both domestic and foreign tourists. Peak season at Dream Land Beach are usually happened on holidays.
And the last is about Bedugul Lake. At Bedugul on the edge of the lake stands the temple of Ulun Danu, set in delightful garden. Temple buildings occupy two minutes offshore islets, and these, with their three and eleven tier meru, are hardly surprisingly, much photographed. The Ulun Danu Temple is dedicated to the spirits that control the irrigation system that derive their waters from the lake.
I thought that going to Bali is the most memorable experience because I can know about the beautiful places in Bali.
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